Kumome Update & NEW Trailer: Feedback appreciated

Hey guys! I made a sport named Kumome, and had hoped to launch it for you guys this month. Sadly apple's interface confused me a bit, and I ended up having to make a youngsters model (with out multiplayer or group options), which delayed the launch of the official sport. This type of killed all of my advertising and marketing efforts, and I’ve to start out from scratch once more however thats okay! I’m transferring ahead, and the children' model supplied some actually nice suggestions. Plus I obtained some nice evaluations even when the sport is free haha

The ultimate construct of the sport is prepared, and I’d love some suggestions for the trailer I made. Please take into account that I’m not a video editor so I’d love your persistence.

Right here is the suggestions I used to be given:

• Attempt to synch the edits with the music a bit extra
• Showcase extra of the playing cards results from the beginning
• Put a name to motion on the finish (DOWNLOAD NOW)
• put character outfits at finish
• COOP & PVP Needs to be a lot earlier
• present a few of the story/dialogue choices
• a few of the ranges look boring (from gamers who’ve tried all the degrees who suppose there are higher ranges to showcase)

I’d love any suggestions you discover significantly pertinent.